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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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0 posted 2008-05-27 03:18 PM


My heart is torn up, empty, and destroyed
I'm walking around the hallway of life with a void
in my soul, because I've grown cold to sympathy
and it's sad to see everyone looking at me with empathy
standing next to me, asking me if I'm ok
No, I've just had a really screwed up day
why does everyone magnitize to me
I don't know if it's hard for you all to see
but I'm hurting slowly inside, my spirit is buried alive
and I don't know if I have anything left to survive
my mind is confusing me, sending me false images
should I end it, or cover my soul with bandages.

[chorus] x2
You see
my broken soul
slowly stitch it up
and cure it once and for all
for the pain I feel is
killing me inside
[/chorus]

Tears of my empty past overlooks my face
the path of broken dreams and goals is what I retrace
to that empty space in my memory I have forgotten
it flashes back to me and all I smell is rotten
flesh and the blood of innocent souls
for the war in my spirit left me empty and dark as coal
the toll it takes on me shows very easily
the hole I'm falling in is getting larger constantly
honestly I'm getting tired of hopeless changes
discontent among races has been going on for ages.

[chorus] x2
You see
my broken soul
slowly stitch it up
and cure it once and for all
for the pain I feel is
killing me inside
[/chorus]

You see me as a kid with no remorse
of course, why else would my throught be hoarse
to the mere thought of apologizing for things.
the way my soul sings through the guitar strings
is insane to those who don't understand ambition
to be not only a rapper, but a musician
a lyrical magician who relys on the definition
of a person who has not only skills, but intuition
about certain events and problems going on inside
my mind is blind, and I can't decide
wether or not I'm going to go all the way with this
I didn't even know such a level of pain exists
my soul is an abyss towards sympathetic voices
and I am unable to make empathetic choices.

[chorus] x2
You see
my broken soul
slowly stitch it up
and cure it once and for all
for the pain I feel is
killing me inside
[/chorus]

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WolfsMate
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since 2000-01-14
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1 posted 2008-05-27 03:56 PM


Liked this very much. I would love to hear the music to it.

"Inside a Broken Dream.."

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
Posts 415

2 posted 2008-05-27 04:12 PM


It's coming soon :]

I'm young so I don't have connections right now lol :[

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