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Open Poetry #42

A Moment Away

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2008-05-27 10:20 AM

A MOMENT AWAY
8 October 2006

leaf, brown-curled,
lifting softly,
seductively,
wind-floating,
sixties’ tune,
velvet-voiced,
feather-finger touch
on a waiting shoulder,
oh, yes, I will dance with you
and the life behind things.

- Owl

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

1 posted 2008-05-27 11:13 AM

Perfectly lovely and rich. Much enjoyed.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2008-05-27 12:55 PM

Thanks, Tina. Glad you liked it.

- Owl

WolfsMate
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 121
New York

3 posted 2008-05-27 03:51 PM

So Lovely. I can almost hear music.

"Inside a Broken Dream.."

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

4 posted 2008-05-27 05:31 PM

Very nice, a whisper on my cheek.
Romantical.
~H

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-05-27 05:44 PM

Dear Diana, this is very lovely! A blissful moment.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2008-05-28 12:50 PM

Very nice, Diana.
Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

7 posted 2008-05-28 01:16 AM

Thank you, WolfsMate, Unboundpoetess, Margherita and Marchmadness. It is about a guy way back then in my church whom I thought was interested in me, but wasn't.

-Owl

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2008-05-28 04:56 PM

Nice Idea Owl, you begin the music of words and finally get the dance, very well crafted and subtle...

yann

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

9 posted 2008-05-29 02:29 AM

Thanks, yann, especially for noticing.

- Owl

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