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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2008-05-26 06:40 AM



there were forests of sand
trees we could be tall gods over
in our bare feet secrets
when the night brought dreams

I remember the walls of tired wood
leaning into the seeping of zydeco
and how your whispers felt there
like kiss liquor and sipping hungry

my shoulders fit your easy
but your hands held me back
just long enough for a slow smile
before we climbed into our trees

and waited in our limbs with wind
praying no dawn would notice
the paleness of our feathers
when they were wet and wanting more

than just the occasional of oceans


daark

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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2008-05-26 09:09 AM


D

What a treat to glimpse my mornimg with. Now, I am heading back to bed with a smile.

A

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-05-26 04:45 PM


ms ali-san..thanks babe, sleep well.
Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2008-05-26 05:51 PM


I think I will just leave a sigh in awe here for once ... you are almost too good for comments.

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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4 posted 2008-05-26 07:09 PM


a wonderful treat to start  my day with Mr Daark... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
5 posted 2008-05-26 07:11 PM


you spin me silly and o so good from forest to ocean and all the sands in between
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2008-05-26 07:13 PM


I have missed reading you

my fault I haven't been around much

what a treat!

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
7 posted 2008-05-27 05:56 AM


ms mar, thank you lady friend


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ms r&b, thanks lady for the eyes and smile


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ms inky, thanks babe for playing in my yard here


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ms ps, thanks hon for coming back...and reading

unboundpoetess
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since 2008-05-24
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8 posted 2008-05-27 07:33 PM


I am so drawn to your work.
You strum my poetical strings.
~H

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
9 posted 2008-05-27 09:39 PM


unbound friend, you bless me with your eyes and your replies, thank you for the touch
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