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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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0 posted 2008-05-25 02:51 PM


twenty miles north of no where
I find my pen once again
the laughter in the trees
the music of the stream
follow the unknown road
to a place I have seen
in my minds soul
I can begin again.

theres nothing I regret
only to change what I would do
to make myself free
to make myself me
would be to ride the wind
two wheel style
racing the sunset north
writing my own path.

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jody5
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1 posted 2008-05-25 02:56 PM


Wonderfully descriptive of freedom.  Great write!

Hugs Kimberly


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2 posted 2008-05-25 04:48 PM


Yep, I like this one.

A

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2008-05-25 04:52 PM


I love the sense of adventure and freedom in this write!

May the path ahead be a happy one! Enjoy the journey!


EA

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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4 posted 2008-05-26 03:38 AM


Something tells me that you ARE riding the wind and writing your own path.  Much enjoyed.

- Owl

Claira
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5 posted 2008-05-26 07:32 AM


Very nice, really enjoyed.

Claira

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