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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2008-05-24 08:49 PM


My life, thus far, is worthy "shakes"
every wrinkle on my face
each white splotch upon my arm
from fast stirring of pot meals,
and the pick-axe tool's surreal
pulling up the Japanese
Plum tree that m'grammaw grew
right beside the stage cesspool
where I used to put on shows.

My life has been Shakesperian.
And I would not trade that for "real"

hedgelined pathways to my door...

Light the cigarette for me?

My life, thus far, is worthy shakes.



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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2008-05-24 09:21 PM


No doubt in my mind at all, Sis.

None whatsoever.

Shake on.




Claira
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since 2008-05-11
Posts 102
British but living in Thailand
2 posted 2008-05-25 12:41 PM


No regrets, very nice

Claira

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
3 posted 2008-05-25 05:03 PM


I just love you.

and I miss you too....

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2008-05-25 05:14 PM


"My life, thus far, is worthy shakes."

~ Then may your life get even shakier! lol ~ and I mean that in the most positive of ways!

Continue to shake those maracas and dance to your own tune, Serene One.


Linda

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
5 posted 2008-05-26 03:31 AM


There is only one Serenity Blaze on this planet - and how the world is impoverished as a result (oops!  I mean as a result of there being ONLY one)!  But how lucky we all are at Pip to know her and have our lives enriched by her.  When the world starts cloning humans, may I put you forward as the first?

- Owl

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
6 posted 2008-06-19 03:47 AM


"worthy "shakes"", indeed...

I don't know what the challenge was...
but I know I love this...

You are, after all, the queen of 'shaking'...

*smile*

Love ya, lady K...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2008-06-19 12:16 PM


You are one of a kind, Karen. Great shakes.
                                         Ida

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