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vandana
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0 posted 2008-05-24 11:53 AM





Here We are (Again)

We are here now
We have come back
where we are belong?
How long?
We have the days
to smile upon
We are here
Alone again
Where no one can't find us
We are in love
And no one will wonder us
away
standing alone
beside the sea
Where the sea touches
for first time
Here we are
holding on
what we have
Here we are
falling in love
All over again


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-05-24 11:55 AM


Love can be sweeter the second time around!


EA

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2 posted 2008-05-24 12:00 PM


Enjoyed the Write!

I agree with EA!



ARCTIC WIND

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3 posted 2008-05-24 12:27 PM


Sometimes the second time is so much better than the first.  So pleased to hear the happiness of your voice, dear Vandanna.  HUGS
Margherita
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4 posted 2008-05-24 07:12 PM


quote:
We have the days
to smile upon


this is very lovely, dear Vandana!

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-05-26 09:17 PM


A pleasure to read...James
LindsayP
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6 posted 2008-05-27 12:24 PM



I thoroughly agree with all the others

Vandana, you wrote it well.

Lindsay

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7 posted 2008-05-30 03:28 PM


The poems of today are the promises you made yesterday - and just like love, they have become better with time. Poetry, like love, is a commitment...and something to be cherished.




Prasad Nataraj
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8 posted 2008-05-31 12:17 PM


To fall in love is a wonderful feeling; I felt good reading this poem too.
passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2008-05-31 12:24 PM


beautiful
A Romantic Heart
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10 posted 2008-06-02 10:23 AM


oh yes to fall in love again!
Joyce Johnson
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11 posted 2008-06-02 11:05 AM


You have captured a special moment of time in your sweet poetry.  joyce
Ray Sharpe
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12 posted 2008-06-02 01:41 PM


I love the idea that the sea touches for the first time .....like every wave is a first touch ...beautiful
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