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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-05-24 07:05 AM



and out of another time perhaps
you came through the gypsy sky
like a vanilla wind with whispers

given to guide the bronte mare
as the godiva eve shimmering there
without a lantern's willowing warm

moments in shadows as trees
you were a dancer of skin ends
wafting the lingering of leather

and a residue of havana afternoons
lofty from your hidden eden
as a stranger wore your charms

as the jewelry of fingertip worship
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daark

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-05-24 08:32 AM


"sigh" ...... lovely Mr Daark... you always make me want more.... of you ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-05-24 10:03 AM


ms r&b, thanks lady friend
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2008-05-24 11:04 AM


like a vanilla wind with whispers

given to guide the bronte mare
as the godiva eve shimmering there
without a lantern's willowing warm

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Those are the prettiest images, makes me want to cozy up, yanno.

It's a strange magic you write DS, and it's all warm and wonderful, always~

vandana
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4 posted 2008-05-24 11:41 AM


good read
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-05-24 01:22 PM


ms bluezy...you smile me as always babe, thank you


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ms vandana, thank you much

Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2008-05-24 08:02 PM


quote:
and a residue of havana afternoons
lofty from your hidden eden
as a stranger wore your charms

as the jewelry of fingertip worship



Reading you equals ... no, surpasses, the pleasure of a delicious meal ...

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2008-05-24 08:44 PM


Another time, indeed....

"like a vanilla wind with whispers"

What a beauty
of wonder...

what wonder, your mind.

BugBuggy
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since 2005-12-19
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michigan
8 posted 2008-05-24 11:56 PM


one word GREAT

BugBuggy

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-05-25 06:52 AM


ms mar, thanks to you special lady


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ms sun, you are vanilla with your smile, thanks  babe


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friend bug..thanks so much to you

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