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Open Poetry #42

Eternal Souls Clashing.

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

0 posted 2008-05-23 03:54 PM

The battle raging
inside my soul
is an eternal clash of conflict.

Pride
verses forgiveness.

The battle explodes around my eyes.

The debree forms a replicate
of my soul.

There I see a man
who's eyes are as dark as coal
who's body is filled with evil
and I reach out
and touch him.

My karma rubs against his karma
my touch graces his touch
and the moment we connect
an explosion of light and dark
erupts in my eyes.

There, a man appears with a scroll
and tells me, remember these words:

Pride is only good for a short time
vanity inside a man destroys the soul
so love one another, as if they control your life
before the death bell tolls.

Remember those words, never let them go.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-05-23 06:38 PM

Yo Angel,

This is very deep, and the thought:

"so love one another, as if they control your life"

is, of course, a good one.

Bobby

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-05-23 09:02 PM

Very deep thoughts for one so young.
Ida

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