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kanashe
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since 2008-05-21
Posts 59
america

0 posted 2008-05-23 10:52 AM



I don’t love you anymore
Is all you said to me
Pulling my heart out
For everyone to see

You dropped me just like that
As if I meant nothing to you
What about the things we had?
Does it even matter to you?

I gave you my heart
I sold you my soul
You pulled us apart
And dug me a hole

You buried me so deep
Forgetting all our memories
Too deep to be seen
Too deep to breathe

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K-K
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since 2008-03-13
Posts 153
Indiana
1 posted 2008-05-23 11:09 AM


Sorry for your pain, hopefully it's a stepping stone to a bigger, brighter new relationship elsewhere. Keep posting!!
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-05-23 11:57 AM


I have compassion for your situation. I've been there, as well. But fortunately, when that door closed, a window opened to new and greener pastures!

You did a good job of emoting!

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

EA

gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
3 posted 2008-05-23 02:57 PM


If the bucket is emptied and nothing replaces it, all that is left is emptiness. True love, in my view, must always be a two way street.

You have done well to write a poem filled with intense pain and disappointment. I often use poetry to start the process of healing.

Wishing you the best,

Art

kanashe
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since 2008-05-21
Posts 59
america
4 posted 2008-10-09 03:43 PM


thanks you all

-ashe

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