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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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The pits is the bottom doubled, times two. What is it that you want me to do? You won’t understand, But it's the way that I am. It's how I've been made these pieces won’t fade. It's a part of me. YES, I said me. You’re so wrapped up in the depth of yourself; you’re blind, you can't see the all that we need that all any of us need is peace. Release the anger, release the pain. Man, I'm tellin ya there ain't no shame. There's only the truth of it all, the honesty. You are you and I'm just me but grace is found in sweet release. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and that IS the truth, Donna  M |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Wonderful in the truth that you write, Donna. I am printing this for my self - a reminder that I can use too. xoxoxo A |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Love this and you can sing it to the tune of 'Instant Karma' (John Lennon)... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hey Donna  this is a great way of releasing....i too will be printing this off to read when ever I want!  it's always good to be here for a few, before summer starts getting crazy....enjoyed!  |
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Claira Member
since 2008-05-11
Posts 102British but living in Thailand |
This is powerfully truthful. Thank you Claire |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all for stopping in, you bless me with your kind comments. This was an exercise for me, a type of challenge to myself to step out of my "comfort zone". thank you, each!! Hugs. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This is really quite compelling in its power, dear Donna! Deeply insightful too. Thank you for this excellent write, to which no doubt many can relate. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Margherita, your visits are so welcomed by me. Thank you for your kindness, it is always a treat to hear from you. HUGS ~D |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Powerful ending, Donna...the 'sweet release' of letting go, which ends in acceptance. |
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