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Mermaid's Song
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Mermaid's Song |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 Mermaid’s Song Waves roll gently to the rocky shore as sinking sun shines gracefully upon the enchanted waters. A prince sits pining on the docks while listening to the melodious tune of a siren’s song. Maiden of the sea, with hair so red, sits on a rock on distant shore, --singing in tune with the waves. The prince dreamily gazes into the dancing blue waters, --falling in love with maiden of the sea. As she sings the Mermaid’s Song *_* * ARCTIC WIND Life isn't just given to you Life is about Creating it.. -Arctic Wind |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Pretty! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beauty! |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
really nice accompniment to a beautiful picture... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
such a lovely poem yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Michael, I fear you are this Prince who has been captivated by the siren's song, as you write so lovingly about it! You enchant, young man. Love, Margherita  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
T- Thank you! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Passing Shadows- Thanks  ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Artic Wind, This is fairly good. However, all my mermaids have coal black hair. Bobby |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Simon- Thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Islander- Thank you! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita- Thank you so much! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Bobby- Thank you! ARCTIC WIND |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
You can sure write. This is fantastic. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Michael if mermaids were only real we'd spend all our time in the sea. great write. Lindsay |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a lovely, soothing poem ~ with a surreal feel to it. A feel good read! ~ as are all of your posts, dear ARCTIC WIND!  With ooos, 'n awwwws, 'n love, EA  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you've painted a beautiful picture...and the red hair was a nice touch |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
O ROSE- Thanks! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lindsay! Happy your back! Thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
EA- Thank you so much! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Steavenr- lol Thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Saturday I thought of your poem, dear Michael, when I bought a crystal mermaid of Kopenhagen in a convent for the benefit of missionaries. She is lovely! Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita! Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy your Mermaid! ARCTIC WIND |
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