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Silent Still
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Silent Still |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Amber glow rolled in slow over valleys awakened by warming touch of such beautiful hues where breath taking views danced across horizons canvas painted in earth tones of greens and blues. I breathed in the quiet of you and it filled me with your essence of calm where I felt safe from harm and even now I can feel two hearts lingering in the silent still. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
How lovely it is to see you so happy. I love your poem. My favourite lines are the first line of the first stanza and the first two of the second stanza. - Owl |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! Love this! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Donna, This reads like that first breath of cool morning air that precedes a hot summer day. Know what I mean? It's beautiful (like my favorite time of day). Xxoxoxo A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You convey sweet harmony with your beautiful words, dear Donna. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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BugBuggy Member
since 2005-12-19
Posts 130michigan |
this is great.....i loved the part of breathing in the essense of you that was a great line heck as i said before it was great BugBuggy |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the silent still is a place i love to get lost in too beautiful beautiful |
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