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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-05-20 07:59 PM


           Kindness

In this world of dream-time
  passing…
(Like the fine white clouds
  of summer)
we shall ultimately leave  
no traces lingering
to greet another spring;
only the grandest wisdom
of humble kindness stands…
to travel down the endless
path of years.

     ---b. e. adams (5/20/08)

© Copyright 2008 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-05-20 09:07 PM


A wonderful legacy, Bruce, to be remembered for kindness. Thank you for the kindness you show in all your replies and comments!
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2 posted 2008-05-20 10:14 PM


secondhanddreampoet:
  Truly we leave little behind, so quickly turned to dust- but as you so eloquently phrased, our actions can leave a legacy by touching others lives.  I was overcome with the wisdom in these lines:
"only the grandest wisdom
of humble kindness stands"
Your style of writing is such a pleasure to read.
sharyn

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in order to use you
as He planned"  J.C. Macauley

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-05-20 10:19 PM


Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

This is very wise work.  Let's not forget "forgiveness".

Bobby

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4 posted 2008-05-21 03:17 AM


This is a wise and beautiful piece, Bruce.
and so very true.
                               Ida

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5 posted 2008-05-21 11:10 AM


wonderful!!

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6 posted 2008-05-21 11:34 AM


Kindness---given a voice to speak to us through poetry! This is wonderful artistry!

Art

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7 posted 2008-05-21 12:01 PM


simply expressed and very true...
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8 posted 2008-05-21 01:26 PM


Your kindnesses have affected more lives than you know, Poet, and this poem is perfectly written. Greatly enjoyed.
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9 posted 2008-05-21 05:40 PM


You write with such beauty and your words share so much truth.

Alison

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10 posted 2008-05-21 06:43 PM


You are loving kindness, dear Bruce!

This is beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

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11 posted 2008-05-24 02:39 AM


Just props this one back up at the top because it deserves another go-around.

A

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12 posted 2008-05-24 03:37 PM


One of the greatest gifts - if not the greatest - and one that everyone without exception can give at any and all moments - is kindness.  Thank you for reminding us.

- Owl

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13 posted 2008-05-24 04:23 PM


Your words are an elegant truth.
Thank you for sharing,
~H

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14 posted 2008-05-24 06:02 PM


Unboundpoetess, I just came back for another read, and wish I could have said what you said!
secondhanddreampoet
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15 posted 2008-05-25 11:31 PM


A profound thank you to all who commented on this (and other) of my 'poems'...

This 'penning' was my 350th...perhaps it is high time to quit?!

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16 posted 2008-05-29 02:13 PM


Reading this one again, just because......
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