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layla
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since 2000-11-19
Posts 74


0 posted 2008-05-20 02:47 PM



Words and Rhymes get me through the hard times
Those times when I feel people dont care
when Im all alone and no one is there
The paper and pen are my only friends
and if I ever make mistakes
they can easily be erased
When my heart hurts I pour it out into words
when my mind is racing my pen is racing
chasing every thought until they get caught
Onto this paper my thoughts will be freed
the paper and pen are all that I need
Words and Rhymes are my saviors sometimes
Those times when Love is truly missed
Or when I feel like it just dont exist
Its a shame that true beauty is sometimes overlooked
and when I think of beauty I think of all my books of words and rhymes
They're my one of a kind
They capture my inner essence
and when I'm gone you'l feel my presence
through my words and rhymes.






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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-05-20 07:54 PM


Yo Layla,

This is nice.  It would be easier to read in black, or navy blue font.

Bobby

shyvl
Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
2 posted 2008-05-20 10:19 PM


Poetry can truly sooth the wounding of the world.  Keep trusting in those words and rhymes to free those inner demons.  It works.  Thanks for sharing
sharyn

"God made you as you are
in order to use you
as He planned"  J.C. Macauley

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2008-05-23 09:28 AM


yes sometimes
the paper and the pen
are friends indeed

ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2008-05-24 02:51 AM


I am a soldier, I wave my sword
the finest quill of words ever heard

I brave the darkness, a torch of the night
I share my ideals, inklings in the light

I am a poet, of sound heart and soul
.... non other can make Life's verses stroll


Bic and Mead, by two bestest friends!!

Ct

D.Lester Young
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx
5 posted 2008-05-24 08:07 AM


Very nice and I agree that Poetry is a seeing eye to a Poet's HeArt Beats of Artmosphere's inflections, reflections, and retroflections.
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