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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural

0 posted 2008-05-18 11:04 PM





The Setting Sun

With setting of sun
Balmy winds stir the palm trees
Into gentle sway

ARCTIC WIND

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-05-18 11:41 PM


Very lovely, ArticWind.
                Ida

r v wooo
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since 2007-08-07
Posts 656

2 posted 2008-05-19 10:00 AM


arctic...enjoyed...short description but complete...and the picture is worth a thousand words.
shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
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texas, usa
3 posted 2008-05-19 01:04 PM


Very visual, nicely done
sharyn

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2008-05-19 03:42 PM


Artic Wind,

This is a nice picture and poem combination.  Keep up the good work.

Bobby

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
5 posted 2008-05-19 06:13 PM


Oh, you capture the essence of complete tranquility. very beautiful!
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
6 posted 2008-05-20 06:13 AM


Dear Michael, spectacular picture and wonderful words in accompaniment. Such harmony you create, inviting to linger ...

Love this much!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

LeeJ
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7 posted 2008-05-20 12:23 PM


your words paint landscapes

beautiful

Robert Frazier
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8 posted 2008-05-20 01:14 PM


a breath of fresh breeze!

R

Artic Wind
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9 posted 2008-05-20 08:47 PM


MarchMadness-

Thank you so much!



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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10 posted 2008-05-20 08:47 PM


R v wooo-

Thanks



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-05-20 08:48 PM


Shvyl-

Thank you!



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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12 posted 2008-05-20 08:48 PM


Robert Jordan-

Thank you!



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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13 posted 2008-05-20 08:48 PM


TD-

awwww! thanks



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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14 posted 2008-05-20 08:49 PM


Margherita-

Thank you so much

I am glad that you liked it..



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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15 posted 2008-05-20 08:49 PM


Leej-

WOW! thanks



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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16 posted 2008-05-20 08:50 PM


Robert-

Thanks



ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2008-05-23 03:08 PM


Awww, AW, that balmy breeze is carrying me away. I'm swaying like the palm trees...

Lovely post!

EA

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
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Oklahoma USA
18 posted 2008-05-23 08:57 PM


You are a wonderful poet. This is a fantastic haiku.
Artic Wind
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19 posted 2008-05-24 11:50 AM


EA-

Thank you so much!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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20 posted 2008-05-24 11:51 AM


O Rose-

Thanks



ARCTIC WIND

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