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Poetaddict
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since 2008-05-18
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0 posted 2008-05-18 09:30 PM



A drop of blood
Is dropping in the water
A drop made of blood, pain and violence
Nobody can recognize it
Nobody wants to understand
The drop is floating further
But they’ve all seen it.

A tear
Is falling in the snow
A tear made of desperation and fear
Nobody tries to help this poor girl.
Nobody is turning around twice-
The tear disappears,
And nobody cares.


All are going home
Like nothing ever happened.
They close the door they close their eyes.
Don’t want to know anything
About what was happening-
Falling quickly asleep
Everybody got their entertainment.

A thunderstorm is coming up
Blowing over the country
A thunderstorm made of vandalism and hate
Rivers are roaring
Ripping all down
Villages are burning
Nobody will ever come back again.

A few are still alive
A few alive full of surrender and fear
They knee down
Holding their arms up
They’re begging for grace
But everybody lost.

A lot of Mistakes the mankind did
Mistakes, which nobody will forgive.
Undignified to live on this earth
They have to leave
Far away and exiled
They are going to the land of death.


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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2008-05-24 01:58 AM


I can't help wonder why,  both of your poems ended in death??
There's a whole lot of living to do, doncha know!!

Enjoy your time on the blue pages, it's a pretty nice place to be.


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