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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-05-18 04:35 PM


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Bright
And dark
Clouds

Today
The sky’s
Changing moods—

Seems familiar


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© Copyright 2008 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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1 posted 2008-05-18 04:46 PM


Yo John,

I got a kick out of this one.  It's well done, and true.

Bobby

jwesley
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2 posted 2008-05-18 04:50 PM


KOOL!

j.

Huan Yi
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3 posted 2008-05-18 04:52 PM


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Thanks guys


John


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Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-05-18 07:55 PM


Enjoyed The Write!



ARCTIC WIND

steavenr
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5 posted 2008-05-18 09:11 PM


Isn't that just like memory...you have captured it well
shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
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texas, usa
6 posted 2008-05-19 01:28 PM


So even clouds have mood swings.  They are as mercurial as the rest of us.  This was a lovely image.  Thanks
sharyn

gilead
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since 2008-03-10
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7 posted 2008-05-19 04:53 PM


"Seems familiar"---
understatement that drop like an anvil upon an anvil! Oh, how the clouds do change in the fading hum of passing moments . . .

Loved it!

Art

The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18
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EL, Michigan
8 posted 2008-05-19 06:01 PM


Those darn clouds and their mood swings

Anyway, I enjoyed your concise write up on the ever moody clouds. It made me think about them from a completely different perspective.

~Jill

jmjovies
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since 2008-05-03
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florida
9 posted 2008-05-20 12:51 PM


i like the idea of the sky changing moods.
thanks

Robert Frazier
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10 posted 2008-05-20 12:54 PM


I enjoyed this...lots of message in few words!

R

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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11 posted 2008-05-20 02:54 PM


I've had those oddly familiar moments myself...there is song by ALanis Morrsette called princes Familiar....beautiful song...ecspecially coming out of her normally sarcastic stuff.

~~~kingsangel~~~

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