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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2008-05-18 02:23 PM

Perhaps our world
is a small molecule
in a tear,
on the eyelash
of one who weeps for us.

Ida Werrett

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (05-19-2008 03:30 PM).]

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-05-18 03:39 PM

interesting...very interesting...much to contemplate in a little space

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-05-18 04:28 PM

A very original idea, so creatively expressed, dear Ida.
I love this much ... though I hope the tear will remain firmly in place or if it has to fall may it fall upon his smile ...

Thank you for this sparkling moment.

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2008-05-18 05:08 PM

I love this, Ida. One of my really top favourites of yours.

- Owl

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-05-18 07:57 PM

Creative MarchMadness!

ARCTIC WIND

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

5 posted 2008-05-18 08:43 PM

a very interesting thought, ida, thanks for sharing.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2008-05-18 11:28 PM

Thank you Sreaven, Margharita, Owl, ArticWind and rv wooo.
Margharita, I guess in my minds's eye I was thinking more of "her" smile.
Owl, I am so happy to see you back.
ida

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

7 posted 2008-05-19 11:57 AM

This is beautiful Ida...much enjoyed.

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

8 posted 2008-05-19 12:56 PM

It was like those expensive chocolates- small but exquiste. Thanks for sharing
sharyn

"God made you as you are
in order to use you
as He planned" J.C. Macauley

jmjovies
Junior Member

since 2008-05-03

Posts 32
florida

9 posted 2008-05-20 12:52 PM

wow
this one got me

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

10 posted 2008-05-20 01:01 PM

Loved it!

And it made me think that...
Perhaps our world
is a large smile
on the lips,
on the face
of one who laughs with us.

R

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

11 posted 2008-05-20 02:40 PM

Dear Ida,

This is an interesting concept. Who knows about such things.

Love Bobby

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

12 posted 2008-05-20 04:50 PM

Ida - not only is it an "interesting" thought but probably a right thought. Still, I wish the one who cries for us would rather wave his magic wand and put a smile on everyone's face - oh, and love in the heart.

Helen

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

13 posted 2008-05-21 03:08 PM

Thank you, Ida. It's good to be back.

- Owl

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

14 posted 2008-05-21 03:54 PM

Oh my word! That's the most beautiful thought. I never would have conceived of it. And I love the way you presented it, too. Excellent.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

15 posted 2008-05-24 02:26 AM

Ever so powerful, Ida. A true keeper.

Alison

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