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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-05-17 10:02 PM


Sally’s through dancing
for the night.  

She’s relaxed,
tired,
and her body’s aching
from all the moves
she’s been making
on the dais.  

Sally and Felix
are sitting quite
at a table.  

They’re holding hands,
as man and wife should.  

They get up to leave.  

Felix has brought
a nice warm coat to cover
Sally’s near naked body.  

Felix wraps her up,
while late-leave bar patrons
look away.  

No one’s anxious
to mess with Felix.  

He’s got this reputation.  

It’s one o’clock in the morning,
and a few little kids
are still shooting hoops
in the playground
across the street
from home.  

Bobby

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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2008-05-17 10:08 PM


Felix and Sally certainly led an interesting life.
                           Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-05-17 10:28 PM


Thanks dear Ida,

Yes they do live interesting lives.  They're still at it.

Love Bobby

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
3 posted 2008-05-18 07:21 AM


interesting atmosphere.

  yann

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-05-18 09:07 AM


Thanks Yann,

Yes, it's an interesting place.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-05-18 09:17 AM


well to me, it says, Felix knows how to care for his sweet and beautiful Sally..... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 posted 2008-05-18 12:53 PM


Thanks dear RDB,

Yes, Felix is always the gentleman.

Love Bobby

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2008-05-18 02:42 PM


shooting hoops at one a.m.

now that's my kinda place

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
8 posted 2008-05-18 04:00 PM


Thanks dear Passing shadows,

You've got it Hon.  Yeah, were "bad" here--just plain rotten to the core.

Love Bobby

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