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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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0 posted 2008-05-27 06:22 AM



Words of a sea
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Words of a sea spoken in close whispers
It is an avid proponent of sky.
I wish I could lift my face to sky, blue.
Instead I decide to watch the death-pain
of a jelly fish spread and scattered on sand.
The playful pebbles stare at my wet foot,
they soon will be known to them at least for
this weekend. And, after that millions of more
prints will mingle and blend into time, undisturbed.

clever talks delay friendship!

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-05-27 04:12 PM


Dear Ku, I have missed you.

Your poetic rendering of a moment at the sea is profoundly captivating, you are always very much aware of the duality of our lives.

Never resist the beckoning sky though, it feels good to look upwards!

Beautiful!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-05-29 01:02 AM


Ku... your words are very beautiful... but I agree with our dear Margherita.. the sky is a very wondrous thing to ponder on too...   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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