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With total abandon
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With total abandon |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * With total abandon * When your eyes lock with mine my freedom blends with yours, our thoughts cast somersaults and there is laughter for a while, until the ear drumming subsides. Our breath creates a new sound that has not been given a name yet, but we keep the magical note going and balance on its wide extension intrepid like skilled rope dancers. When our arms hold the world and we see through and beyond the defiant walls of inbuilt caution you move the first dancing step and I follow you with total abandon. We leave footprints in sky meadows upon the shorelines of universe and within each other’s heart space. We expand as far as the echoes of love cast randomly into the ether of forever. When your eyes lock with mine my freedom blends with yours, yes. We surrender to the gravitational pull, like the tides of our eternal soul we rise and fall with total abandon. * |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Margherita, You paint an attractive picture with this poem--very good work. Bobby |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Wow Margherita, you wrote this poem with, total abandon! I truly loved it, wonderful! Rich |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"We leave footprints in sky meadows on the shores of the Universe" Wow! you are such a romantic soul Margharita. I envy your ability to write such lovely, romantic poetry. Ida |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
We leave footprints in sky meadows upon the shorelines of universe and within each other’s heart space. We expand as far as the echoes of love cast randomly into the ether of forever Oh Margherita!! such beauty in your words lovely one! ... "footprints in sky meadows"... just beautiful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
dear friend, you are getting more and more intense poet who have a mission: ie.to spread the message of love. here you have written something which shall always be eternal and universal clever talks delay friendship! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, lovely work your ocean of love here |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
With total abandon I read your poem and I feel good. thanks yann |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thrilling write, meter and metaphor! ;0 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Paradisaical! Divinely exquisite!  Maga Margherita, you weave a tapestry of love with 'total abandon'. You love deeply and with an ocean of devotion! Love your poetry ~ and you!  Linda xo |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Absolutely loved the opening two lines - of course the rest of it was pretty awesome too, my friend...but the first two lines just jumped off the page for me. Really enjoy reading you... jimmy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew I'm breathless! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
You Always can write a beauty! always...  ARCTIC WIND |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Wow! This is beautiful. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Bobby, for your kind comment and for seeing the picture … Dear Richy, thank you for your generous wow! Dear Ida, I have no doubt about your own ability to feel love and express it “with abandon”. Thank you so much for your kind words. Thank you, dear Roniece, for the “oh” which shows your genuine approval! It’s so good to have you back here. My dear friend Ku, thank you so much for your loving words … I do love to write about love, yes it is my favourite topic! Dear D., thank you, for navigating this ocean of love … Merci, cher Yann, pour le sourire que tu m’as apporté ! Thank you, dear Kathleen, for your kind appreciation, I value your comments highly. Angelo Terrestre, I smile always broadly when I find your sweet, joy filled and generous comments! You are a glittering star on Pip. Thank you from my heart. Dear Jimmy, I thank you for specifying your favourite lines, indeed I too think that the blending of each other’s freedom is a big gift. Dear Dixie girl, thank you so much for your sweet comment! Thank you for the “always”, dear Michael, that’s a lovely thing to say! Dear Oklahoma Rose, it’s nice to find you here visiting and commenting so lovingly. With love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A wonderful flow of thoughts...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear James, funny we were on each other's poems contemporaneously. Aloha! love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"Our breath creates a new sound that has not been given a name yet" Now how beautiful is that? Spectacular. miss |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
margherita, enjoyed the dance...a lovely poem. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
beautiful...simply beautiful...you have painted such a lovely picture with your pen My favorite stanza; "We leave footprints in sky meadows upon the shorelines of universe and within each other’s heart space. We expand as far as the echoes of love cast randomly into the ether of forever." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Vandana, thank you for jumping in and enjoying it. Dear Balladeer, it's so nice to have your very kind comment on my poem, thank you! Dear r v wooo, thank you for dancing along! Dear Steaven, thank you so much for telling me you liked it. Love, Margherita |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
I am captivated by your glorious dance of verse. These lines: " When your eyes lock with mine my freedom blends with yours, our thoughts cast somersaults and there is laughter for a while, until the ear drumming subsides. Our breath creates a new sound that has not been given a name yet, but we keep the magical note going and balance on its wide extension intrepid like skilled rope dancers." your similies? of circus acts where enchanting as the rest of the write. Well, well done sharyn "God made you as you are |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
as I read my Butt abandoned my seat ..... beautifully written, deeply sound! Ct |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
a soaring, beautiful poem!!! Hugs, Robert |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
This one has me soaring in the clouds of imagination! What a splendid work of art! Art |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
This one has me soaring in the clouds of imagination! What a splendid work of art! Art |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Sharyn, thank you so much for your loving comment. Dear ctowen, thank you for coming in here and making me smile! Dear Robert, thank you, so nice to find you here with such a lovely comment. Dear Art, your comment warms my heart, thank you so much. Love and hugs to all. Margherita |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I have no idea how on earth I missed replying to this (I must have been at work and couldn't reply when I read it) I am glad I came back to it. You write such beauty Sweet Lady. Hugs. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
(((((Donna))))  Thank you dear! love and hugs Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
All I know, darling dear, is that you took my breath away with this one. Wonderful you, Alison |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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