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0 posted 2008-05-17 11:15 AM



Immortal Vine by Sonnet

The very depths of soul beseech one velvet meal
In sate so ravenous to feed by destiny
Besieged in freedoms pure enchantment, hungers zeal                
Two light of heart adorns iambic harmony

As this my love, propounds the feast lest sin
Whereby each soul is made impoverished to dine
When we have found the garden sown, as weed grows thin
With trembled lips so sweet to sip immortal vine

Then this my praise, to rise above the surface course
As you alone are but my thirst and hunger shed
And free, so free, without undue reviewed  remorse
My needs fulfilled are just dessert when sweetly said

My heart so full, ingratiates a banquets touch
To feast of blessed rite and freedoms full as such

Copyright Kkh 5/17/08

© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
r v wooo
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1 posted 2008-05-17 11:32 AM


believe this is my first experience reading your work...it was a very interesting experience. hope to see and read more in the future. #42 moves so quickly and i move so slowly. therefore, i miss soooooooo much.
Richy
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2 posted 2008-05-17 11:33 AM



Oh Kathleen, I don't know how you do it. The likes of Shakespeare's shadow is smiling right now, embracing your true gift, and so am I.

Rich

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3 posted 2008-05-17 07:37 PM


My, but we have certainly dropped a poetic
surprise upon the lands around us...Perfect?
No, NEVAH....WHY?  because mine have never
been perfect and I ain't gonna sit here and
watch you do it....  Great write...

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