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Open Poetry #42

Glowing Sea, (Sonnet)

Thalen
Junior Member

since 2007-12-15

Posts 35
New Jersey, USA

0 posted 2008-05-16 08:48 PM

Glowing Sea,

Pearls of a gentle dew is hitting me,
As you walk ahead on the road.
Now as rain falls upon the glowing sea,
As my stiff expression now erodes.

As rain so falls upon my umbrella,
Please do so retreat to my shelter close,
So you won’t catch a cold Daniela.
Unless this is a plan I suppose,

To be tended by my careful hands
Let you sleep in bed unto noon, darling?
Is that your simple mischievous plan?
Well dear, you won’t catch me quarrelling.

This plan is a fine plan after all hun,
Let us go home for we now run!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2008-05-17 01:15 PM

enjoyed it. I like the rain,

yann

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

2 posted 2008-05-17 02:50 PM

i sense erotic undertones...i enjoyed it...but then again, maybe, they weren't there and it was just a figment of my imagination.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-05-17 06:52 PM

Yo Thalen,

This is a cute little number, Hon. Nice to see someone out of Jersey.

Bobby

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