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Transience (#3)
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Transience (#3) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Transience (#3) galaxies spiraling through an ever expanding universe tall tree and sky-bird silhouettes dancing in the sunset a thousand lake ripples in the dwindling twilight empty-street colors melting in a misty rain candles flickering in a uncertain breeze tears of love passing all speak … (with wistful certainty) of eternal flux and change. ---b. e. adams (5/16/08) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
My favorites?: "tall tree and sky-bird silhouettes dancing in the sunset" and "candles flickering in a uncertain breeze" |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, You speak the truth. Very fine write. Bobby |
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Lincoln Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 62Earth |
enjoyed.. good stuff "When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy, cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Really magnificent. A great pleasure reading it... yann |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
shdp, i always enjoy reading your work...interesting and intriguing. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"empty-street colors melting in a misty rain" lovely, sad words that paint a watercolor picture in my mind. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bruce, you have an uncanny ability to be part of the whole and share your feelings very very beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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