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This Night
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This Night |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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It was through the gate Of ceaseless venture Where we first met On that fate and timeless night You, from your land of dawning where saints of roses nestle betwixt the harborage of bays mist and unheard grapevines, that meet the sea Let us engage among the winds of ‘morrows kiss where thickets of conceivings wallow through sweet dreams of everlast Come with me my dear and flame my wick of candles night you, my lost wind of deathless eyes, You, my muse of heavens creaking gate Share with me our bite of hope As I slowly lick the wounds of your past and heal of always Your days to be Spread your light upon river’s mouth and hold firm veins within your open and shadowed glory Satiate your rich longing as I criss cross gushing landscapes Burrowing into those secret sounds and untying the skintight knot of solitude You are the song and plants and waves, of shouts and foam And broken statues of burnt water And yet, if you still can not see between the fondness that you hold so entirely Listen to the voice inside Your heart will somehow, let you know And so Please Don’t read into my words Or pages filled of light Anything Except for you, The love I have, this night Freedom of expression is our, write. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Always enjoy your poems, Richy. Ida |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
richy...interesting an intriguing poem. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
such vivid imagery and descriptions wow! love it! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful! Yes, 'tis written by the soul! Helen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your night, dear Richy, sounds magical through your deeply passionate words. Your poem dances charmingly down the page. Love, Margherita  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
One of the most beautiful love poems I have read. Unique, interesting, tender and powerful. If you ever have break up with her and want her back, I can guarantee that this poem will get her back with immediate effect! - Owl |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Rich with passion |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks so much everybody, you guys are really wonderful you know! Take great care! Rich |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Richy This was an unequaled love poem. Your line structure as always was beautiful. The way you packed the imagery of nature made for a vivid read. Thanks sharyn |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Rich, I read a great deal into your creative writes. To me they are filled with sensuality and innuendo ~ both metaphorically and literally! You are a master weaver! In the still of the night...   Linda |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Hi Richy~ Newbie here. Looked towards the bottom of the page to choose my first read and found you! Interesting word choices made me pay close attention. Bordering on erotic. Seducing read, Richy. ~H |
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