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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2008-05-15 02:02 PM



This burden carries with it
weight that is ours alone to bear
and we shall bear it,

together

weathering whatever these clouds
will rain down
upon a path needing to be yet traveled
shrouded in shadows that would

if they could

bring darkness
to the indestructible force

of us.

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2008-05-15 02:08 PM


Together may you forever weather your life storms.

I understand that so well.

Love to you, Gentle-Spirited One,

Linda

Sunshine
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2 posted 2008-05-15 02:42 PM


together

weathering whatever these clouds
will rain down
upon a path needing to be yet traveled

~*~

Amen, little girl

!

shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
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texas, usa
3 posted 2008-05-15 03:35 PM


"if they could

bring darkness
to the indestructible force

of us."
As if it could-- such determination such confidence of each other.  Thanks for sharing
sharyn

"God made you as you are
in order to use you
as He planned"  J.C. Macauley

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
4 posted 2008-05-15 04:14 PM


"the indestructible force

of us."

Enjoyed your words, GS, and may the "us" always remain an industructible force.

Helen

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-05-15 06:41 PM


Nice...James
Marchmadness
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6 posted 2008-05-16 02:35 PM


Way to go, Donna.
                Ida

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2008-05-16 03:06 PM


just awesome!!

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2008-05-21 02:57 PM


big thanks and hugs to all!!  
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9 posted 2008-05-24 01:49 AM


My beautiful PiP girlfriend,

Such a wonderful and strong poem - that's how I see you though.  You are wonderful and strong.

xoxoxo
A

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
10 posted 2008-05-24 02:03 AM


The force of your words is both gentle and kind,
however, it's your spirit that draws me in.

Don't you ever forget that, Donna~

Love and hugs to you,  dear lady~

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