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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-05-14 09:21 PM


               Passings  

In these ancient hills and forests
when liquescent land and starry sky,
(glowing with wisps of white mist
   by pale moonlight)
magically merge with charmed water…
one can most savor the fine-perfumed
serenity of Spring, dreams, and time…
  passing.

     --- b. e. adams (5/14/08)



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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2008-05-14 09:34 PM


Very pretty write Bruce.
A wonderful tribute poem.

shyvl
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2 posted 2008-05-14 11:47 PM


A beautiful evocative piece.  Your descriptions are always so fresh and new.  I truly felt these words"savor the fine-perfumed
serenity of Spring, dreams, and time…
  passing."  Sometimes in the quiet of the moment in just the right place, I too savor time's passing
sharyn

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Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-05-15 02:18 AM


Your words are magick, Poet.
                      Ida

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-05-15 06:29 AM


It's so good to read you again, dear Bruce.

Wonderfully intense moment described with magic.

Love,
Margherita

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5 posted 2008-05-15 08:04 AM


Bruce,

I have missed you lots.  This is lovely.  Just beautiful.  I hope that you are back to stay for a bit.  

Alison

gilead
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6 posted 2008-05-15 09:41 AM


Enraptured by the words that are so near as to be the very things spoken of! Such is poetry at its finest!

Art

2islander2
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7 posted 2008-05-15 10:25 AM


Savor passing time is the best thing we can do on this earth, I like these so few moments when I feel the life all around me with no hurry but calm and serenity...

  thanks Bruce

    yann

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