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Gurl_unknown_11 Junior Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 17california |
i felt my life could never be ok that it was all a waste of time because my heart has suffered nothing but pain i felt like id be alpne in my own world felt like it would all just fall apart i felt scared scared of letting you in because the scars of where ive been hurt are still there I was so scared youd just be another one but as tme goes by i find myself letting go and letting you in i show you my scars now not worried about what you'll say because i know your there and that you care its ok and that it will all fall into place so ill close my eyes put my hand in yours and dream of a better day |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
This would probably be fine piece of introspection if it was easier to read. I missed several words because my eyes couldn't make them out. Try a darker color. Thanks for sharing sharyn "God made you as you are |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I agree. |
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