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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
the love of a woman is a rope that pulls the man towards the heavens. When for any reason the rope is cut the man collapses into the darkness of the ground. [This message has been edited by 2islander2 (05-13-2008 05:34 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Yann, thank you for this lovely insight into men's psyche. Yes, I think you are right, they may show nonchalance on the surface if the "rope is cut", but they do meet a dark place I am sure! ... it does happen to women too, but they somehow handle the situation better, I believe  Love, Margherita  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yann, I like looking into your pshcye. Thank you for the insight into men. A |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
After some keen observation, I think you are absolutely right and said it very well. yann. Ida |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
very true. but there are reasons for so |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
deep image--the fall of -the fall into darkness loved both stanzas. sharyn "God made you as you are |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Margherita, thank you for you comprehensive comment...You are totally right women need love too but I think they are less fragile... Have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Alison, I think that my poem is a little bit naive but there is some truth for some men... Kisses yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Ida, thank you for your comment. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you poddarku, you are right I think. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Sharyn, the more I read your comments (with other poems too), the more I apreciate them. thank you very much yann |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Give a man enough rope and he'll find a woman to hang him! That's how hopelessly brilliant we guys are in love! An enjoyable read, yann! Art |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi Art, brilliant and funny comment, there are many metaphors indeed behind this rope... have a very nice day yann |
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