Paris Early In The Morning

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Open Poetry #42

Paris Early In The Morning

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-05-11 10:42 PM

Paris Early In The Morning

at the base of the Eiffel Tower...

When I saw the woman
in the white dress
I knew the woman
I wanted to caress.
There was something magic
about her smile
that encouraged my heart
to linger for awhile,
and now I want
to know more
about the woman
in the white dress.

JamesLee
11May
2008

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

1 posted 2008-05-11 11:14 PM

Pure poetry. You used such concrete descriptive images that I too wish to know more about this woman in a white dress.
sharyn

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2008-05-12 09:49 AM

I enjoyed your imagery. I could picture the scene beautifully.

Marilyn

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2008-05-12 11:42 AM

enjoyed

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-05-12 04:12 PM

Thank you shyvl, Marilyn and vandana for the wonderful responses...James

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