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Of Want |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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It was in your eyes, the color of lost people and unfinished dreams where I saw the wooden sky of splintered possibility. Through empty oceans of broken vases I hear your smile its' Moan Like a torn skirt On a branch of wind Falling on Burnt meadows Of powdered coral. I dream your lips, a glistening rose Emerging through The melting sunlight of burning snow Your peaceful tresses Like glittered rain Lay upon my mind And shallow Through marbled Thoughts Of sparrows And flowing grass As your spirit A velvet breath Forever taunting With hues of distant Songs In the dawn Of trapped Emotions Drips onto me And sighs Kiss me Sweet one In our hearts core And hold me Till my breaths Are nevermore As I am surrounded by love And yet, still I am alone Alone with you where we meet in the soul of want and, in the heart of need Freedom of expression is our, write. [This message has been edited by Richy (05-11-2008 09:30 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~~very beautiful~~ M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dear Richy, Please check your mail. Aside from that? An awesome write! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Richy this was a gorgeous write. I'll dream of faraway places. I enjoyed the way you used unique line structure to pace the flow of the lyrics. I particularly like this"Alone with you where we meet in the soul of want and, in the heart of need" In the want of the soul and the heart of need. Beautiful indeed. Pleasure to read sharyn |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Extremely captivating words, dear Richy! It is as if you surrendered to the beckoning of this dream vision and let it flow within your heart, mind and soul, to record the feelings for us. And to read your emotions is a very lovely experience! Love, Margherita  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
umm... WOW! the imagery in this just breathes... I love it! I love it! I love it! "...buried way beneath the sheets |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Really, you are all too kind. One couldn't ask for a nicer bunch of folks. You guys are like, family. Love Rich |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Richy, your love poems elicit more sighs out of me than a stand of willows in a soughing breeze. Loved it!  Linda |
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