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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
somehow the purpled mist of vespertine softens the cacophony of earthen fray as the subdued radiance of a rising moon dulls sharp edges of a falling day perhaps the gods omnipotent employ the moon from heaven sent to dissolve the sun and harken night to bridge divides transcendent or just maybe eventide with passing of the sun hushes man and beast alike with splendor of a day now done |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Fine writing, Tim. Ida |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You share beauty with us. Thank you. A |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderful Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Somehow this is the perfect write to end my day. Thank you, Sir.  |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Excellent way of describing all the possible ways behind sunsets. Loved it sharyn |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I loved this. The discriptive pulled me right into the scene you were setting. Lovely as always. Marilyn |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So very beautiful, Tim! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Wowwee! That was for every element of your poem. Just what I needed, but didn't know till I found it! (Did you mean vespertime?) - Owl |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
oh, your words are always so beautiful. Excellent word choices in this one Ruth |
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