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Open Poetry #42

My Eyes See Differently.

xTr3m3sT
Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

0 posted 2008-05-10 10:06 AM

I see people bleeding
but they don't drip blood
they are bleeding innocence
it's slipping away from them
slowly, without a rush

The blindness of a man with eyes
can't see this horrid tale unfold.

It's a shame
but who is to blame?

They need to learn that this world
will end with a tragic finale
and those who are not ready
will be crucified.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2008-05-10 10:17 AM

A very real picture of a very tragic occurence. Well written, enjoyed.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2008-05-10 11:49 AM

"The blindness of a man with eyes
can't see this horrid tale unfold."

~ Yes, ofttimes it is a man without eyes who can truly see.

May this bleeding of innocence cease and desist ~ before it is too late.

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