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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-05-09 06:09 PM


The Door to So Much More

My darling,
my kiss eagerly awaits
your soft and tender lips,
and as we kiss
as we have so
many times before
we shall unlock
that door, the door
behind which our
most precious desires
had been stored,
the door that released
our hearts to share
a precious love
and so much more.

JamesLee
09May
2008

3of7

Love is Precious



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2islander2
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1 posted 2008-05-09 06:11 PM


so romantic, made me smile..

  yann

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2008-05-09 06:33 PM


You are as romantic as ever James ... this was lovely.

I very much enjoyed the read!

Best wishes,
/Kit

AAB
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3 posted 2008-05-09 10:13 PM


All I have to say is.. Awww how sweat

"Death cannot stop true love, all it can do is delay it for a while" The Princess Bride

shyvl
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4 posted 2008-05-09 10:24 PM


precious thoughts, penned well.  Thanks for sharing
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-05-18 08:39 AM


James... so lovely and so you !!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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6 posted 2008-05-18 08:55 AM


Very lovely and uplifting, dear James!

You do hand her the key to much more ...

Love,
Margherita

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7 posted 2008-05-24 02:52 AM


I love how you share this beautiful part of you, James.

A

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2008-05-24 09:20 AM


Hmm, Hawaii Man. I was just wondering if it might be the pineapples and sugar cane that makes you so sweet! If so, I wish they were staples of Canadian men's diets!

Hugs 'n smiles from across the miles,
Linda

vandana
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9 posted 2008-05-24 11:44 AM


liked it
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2008-05-26 09:13 PM


thank you 2islander2, Kit, AAB, shyvl, Roniece, Margherita, Alison, Earth Angel and vandana for the wonderful responses....
I think its the pineapple and the cherrys, which are available in Safeway right now...James

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