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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-05-09 05:09 PM



you are always more than an arm's length
but that was safer for your sunburn
and most of the things we ever did
that were loverly pleasures
started at least at that distance

until some jealous highway said maybe
we should crowd your shoulders
with my want to dancing handy
and do belly rubbing professionalism
as ladylike as the blues can be

after sipping sunsets slowly til dawn
and fastfooding our kiss mated smiles
so we could get the comfortable on
and wear it all day easy on the outside
til it was more tired than we were

we were broken down limo skins then
double parked in heavenly igloos
with just enough warm to glue our words
like ice cube poetry over candles
and some other sounds without fingers

when you were not to busy with your busy
____________

daark


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2008-05-09 05:45 PM


An early gift for mom's day...



Thanks for the Friday double treat!


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-05-09 05:58 PM


ms sun...my pleasure lady friend, thank you for looking in on this one
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2008-05-09 06:26 PM


"our kiss mated smiles
so we could get the comfortable on
and wear it all day easy on the outside
til it was more tired than we were"...

love those thoughts
M

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-05-09 06:29 PM


ms MMs, thanks babe for the touch and smile
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-05-09 06:33 PM


and I think you are as beautiful as your words Mr Daark.... lovely gifting here.

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-05-09 06:43 PM


ms r&b, thank you lady friend
Indigo
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7 posted 2008-05-09 07:58 PM


wiggle word lassos
bind the outlaw of her mind
draped across his lap.

Indigo

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8 posted 2008-05-10 02:11 AM


D

Even icecube poetry melts under the passion of your poetry.

Wonderful writing.

A

Margherita
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9 posted 2008-05-10 05:46 AM


quote:
after sipping sunsets slowly til dawn
and fastfooding our kiss mated smiles
so we could get the comfortable on
and wear it all day easy on the outside
til it was more tired than we were



It is simply amazing how you dress your emotions in spellbinding words. You are the "haut couturier" of words. And we can dress in your exclusive poems for free ... wow I just realize what a precious gift this is ... what a precious gift you are!

Love and smiles ... kiss mated smiles one of the best, no, I think it's the best, the most original definition of smiles I have ever heard of ...
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2008-05-10 06:52 AM


ms indi, you rope me in with your replies, and make me want to bind you snugly with a smile in return, thanks babe


________________

ms ali-san, thank you for letting the puddles appear from the ice with heat from your smile

_______________


ms mar, you bless me lovely lady with your reads and replies, thank you for the warm of your heart sounds.

Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2008-05-10 09:00 AM


as ladylike as the blues can be

after sipping sunsets slowly til dawn
and fastfooding our kiss mated smiles
so we could get the comfortable on
and wear it all day easy on the outside
til it was more tired than we were
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

wrapped up in
  you and the blues
     a lovely thought
         oh so smooth

mmhhmmm  a smile maker, yup

  you, and this, both are.    

Enjoyed it darkdaddy.

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