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hyde theory with tank top and jam |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you wore laughter lightly like a shiny gray dress with whispers under hemsides something about being mused made you oily in your daydreams and you said you didn't mind how your urges felt on my pen as long as lady like was ok from your chin to your eyes during those meetings in hallways and down the street from somewhere you have never been with a stranger but you always knew I was just outside _______________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Funny title and captivating words. I would say that strangers are extremely tempting ... if they reveal like you do through such a magical pen ...  You really are a well of infinite poetical delight. love, Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
but you always knew I was just outside lovely Mr Daark... you smile me with your words and make me want to peek outside to see if you are there .... Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
there on the outskirts desire sits on the roadside walking or riding? Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady friend _____________ ms r&b, I suspect I would be closer than you would think, thanks for looking ms ________________ ms indi...both I would think...part of seduction is in the walk...then the ride seems to cause one to enjoy the journey thanks ms |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey D, I like this. Don't need to say more 'cept, I like this lots. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks little one, nuff said is always nuff said |
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kanashe Member
since 2008-05-21
Posts 59america |
i loved your title and the poem was nicely written. -ASHE- |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ashe. Thanks for the touch here |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know not only women but men, very well... not everyone has that gift not everyone sees behind the smiles or the eyes or everything else. well done |
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