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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-05-08 08:07 AM





In The Absence Of You

Its those hollow notes
My heart now sings
Loneliness I languish
Upon broken wings

My shattered dreams
Are left without light
Could this be the end
Of heart taking flight

I could no longer soar
As wings fall apart
Knowing your silence
Is breaking my heart

For a heart cannot fly
When nothing flows
In the absence of you
My heartache grows
HopeĀ©2008


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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2008-05-08 11:28 AM


A perfect "achy, breaky heart" match between pic and poem.


Linda


Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-05-10 04:49 AM


Sometimes, dear Hope, the heart's pain reaches tremendous peaks and you express this so beautifully.

Life is motion, in surrendering to what is, we grow new wings to fly again, believe me. Your ability to fly does not depend on others ... it depends on your awareness of being whole and beautiful in every moment.

It is always a joy to find you in here.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2008-05-10 08:15 AM


Great love...I enjoyed

   yann

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2008-05-10 08:37 AM


sorry for the
wings that have shriveled
for now
sweet in its sorrow your words are

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2008-05-18 09:00 AM


Hope... I send you some of my hearthugs to smile your day... lovely gifting here my friend... be well, love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2008-05-18 01:50 PM


I cannot say it any better than Inkedgoddess did my friend...so I quote:

"sorry for the
wings that have shriveled
for now
sweet in its sorrow your words are..."

jimmy

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2008-05-18 02:49 PM


sad stuff here



shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
8 posted 2008-05-20 06:55 PM


Love is the Emperess of Dreams and the Tyrant of Sorrow.  It could not be one without the other. May your heart mend as well as your wings.
sharyn

"God made you as you are
in order to use you
as He planned"  J.C. Macauley

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