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Interlude |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. 
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From a passage of my life a light flickered our brief interlude But the illicit bonds of our liaisons wavered into solitude Insistent memories come and fade of the happiness I thought was mine Cause the smallest glow will burn forever touched by love left far behind But when you're old you'll wonder at loves crimson and more subtle hues Cause a light that shined in happiness can sometimes fade into the blues Rick Delmonico |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, you rendered these feelings very well. This is beautiful. Nice to meet you in picture! Love, Margherita  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is all neat and deep, but my favorite line was this: "Cause the smallest glow will burn forever touched by love left far behind" |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Deft of touch, sensitive, and sweetly spoken--- This is my kind of lyric of love. Art |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Some of my all time favorite songs are the short little tunes that end too soon. Like this one, it tugs hard at my heart strings. Nice going, radman~ |
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