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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2008-05-07 11:42 AM


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Now
Inadvertently
Even in dreams—

I call other women
By your name


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-05-07 11:49 AM


As you call it a "Faux pas" those other women may have reason to be jealous ...

This says so much. It means her name MEANS much to you.

Beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

jmjovies
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since 2008-05-03
Posts 32
florida
2 posted 2008-05-07 12:05 PM


oops
still i like the way you write the confession

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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3 posted 2008-05-07 12:17 PM


ouch...very nicely done...but ouch
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2008-05-07 12:38 PM


... also means you may be --- bobbitted --- come morning...

did like the way you did this....

j

gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
5 posted 2008-05-07 03:13 PM


That's because she's incomparable! Right? Just don't be calling her by other women's names---inadvertently, or otherwise!  

Enjoyed this immensely!

Art

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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6 posted 2008-05-07 10:02 PM


Enjoyed the Write!

ARCTIC WIND

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