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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2008-05-04 09:39 PM


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Stupid
As it may seem
I miss you

Ah you
Fifty year old
Bag of bones

Sparrows
Are in the sky

And regardless
Of our seniority
A robin sings


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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-05-05 08:49 PM


John,

This is very descriptive.  Robins are that way, they just don't care.  I like this loads.

Bobby

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-05-06 01:44 PM


quote:
And regardless
Of our seniority
A robin sings



It's because they know of the sensitivity and beauty of the hearts, regardless of their age.

Beautiful!!

Love,
Margherita


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2008-05-06 04:35 PM


Nice...James
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