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Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-05-04 03:57 PM


Felix and Andrzej
have become good friends.  

Andrzej likes Felix,
and gets permission
from his father
to allow Felix
to unofficially
join the troop.  

Felix likes to
sing and dance
with Andrzej
while the rest of the troop
beats their tambourines,
and plays their banjos
up and down crowded
Kensington Avenue
underneath the El.  

Felix gets to keep
his share of the take.  

Felix sings and dances well.  

Bobby

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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2008-05-04 05:23 PM


Sounds like a wise choice of friends for Felix. Did he learn how to tell fortunes?
                                   Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-05-04 05:30 PM


Thanks dear Ida,

No, I'm afraid no tea leaves.  That would be giving away too many secrets, and craft.

In truth, my mother-in-law did do tea leaves.  She did it well.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (05-04-2008 07:41 PM).]

WindWalker
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3 posted 2008-05-28 11:17 AM


This is a good one!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2islander2
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by the sea
4 posted 2008-05-28 12:43 PM


Hi Bobby always interesting matters and always balanced and well written.

   thanks

   yann

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2008-05-28 12:51 PM


Thanks dear WindWalker,

I'm glad you liked this one.  There's nothing like singing and dancing under our beloved El. (elevated rail line).

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-05-28 12:53 PM


Thanks dear Yann,

For the kind words. I'm pleased this one worked for you.

Bobby

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