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2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2008-05-04 04:51 AM


Le ciel sur Nice
est si bleu,
Il est comme
un chapeau
sur des palmiers
heureux.

Ciel Bleu
je ne regarde
les gens
dans les yeux
que lorsque
je suis amoureux.


There is such
a blue sky
over Nice,
It looks like
a hat
on happy
palmtrees.

Blue Sky
I look
people
in the eyes
only when
I'm in love.

© Copyright 2008 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-05-04 04:54 AM


Voilà, notre cher Yann est tombé amoureux! Tu transmets ta joie de vivre.

I love your poetic perception of the sky today, dear Yann. Very nice!

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-05-04 06:33 AM


oui!! tres tres bon!   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

shyvl
Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
3 posted 2008-05-04 08:32 AM


"There is such
a blue sky
over Nice,
It looks like
a hat
on happy
palmtrees"  I love the way you describe the pieces of our lives so uniquely and eloquently.  Wish I spoke french though
sharyn

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2008-05-04 12:07 PM


You have an almost childlike appreciation for simple things that is very endearing, yann.
                                Ida

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2008-05-04 01:46 PM


outstanding!

Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
6 posted 2008-05-05 03:26 AM


It looks like
a hat
on happy
palmtrees.

Reminds me of a place I used to live,,was never good at writing stuff like this though. Bravo!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
7 posted 2008-05-05 04:46 PM


chère Margherita, merci beaucoup ton commentaire m'a fait sourire et mis du baume au coeur....( I don'k know to translate that)

  thanks and hugs

  yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
8 posted 2008-05-05 04:48 PM


Thank you Roniece, Sharyn and Ida my lovely friends for your dazzling comments.

hugs

  yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
9 posted 2008-05-05 04:50 PM


Thanks to you PS and Angel4 for your truly supportive comments...

  Have a nice day

   yann

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