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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
deaf’ning rain as thundering cymbals ring dancing deftly upon the sill dripping, ripping, dripping, filling streams of significance on brushstrokes of pain covering the panes, revealing the ache droplets of convergence, a milieu of grandeur, simple yet strained as teardrops in windstorms blown blown with west winds warm on the east’s cold face and the storm grows thunderous as raindrops fall, haloed in nimbus |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
This makes me feel sad and lonely Steaven... It reads beautifully... Tammy<333 |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Great Imagery. Enjoyed the thunder rolls! |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Unique phrasing and out of the ordinary imagery makes this poem so poignant. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Tammy so sorry for the darker feelings -- at least you felt -- sure appreciate you reading and commenting TD, thanks for reading -- glad you liked it sharyn, nice of you to be so generous with your kind comments |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Eloquent sadness, Steavenr. Ida |
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