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Joe Crow
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since 2007-12-18
Posts 66
Indiana

0 posted 2008-05-02 09:02 PM


Somewhere Down Under

Silver wings spread high above
encompasses the child below
precious child conceived in love
in the Garden true love sews...


I like the way the sun kisses your face
and leaves it golden brown
and I like the way your lips curl up
when you smile away the frown
I like the way your bikinis cut
and the way it lets you jiggle
I like watching you by the waters edge
and every little wiggle

I like to feel the sand on my feet
summers heat, fun at the beach
just wasting away a few hours
I like pretty girls, pretty flowers
and all the colors under the sun

I like to watch the children play
I think I'll spend all day
just taking in the sights and sounds
and when the sun finally goes down
I think I'll build me a fire
and wait for tomorrow
maybe spend another day
neath the hot summer sun.

© Copyright 2008 Joe Crow - All Rights Reserved
shyvl
Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
1 posted 2008-05-03 05:26 AM


What beautiful sentiments.  I enjoy a day in the sun too.
sharyn

rad802
Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279
KY U.S.A.
2 posted 2008-05-03 06:01 AM


nice
steavenr
Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

3 posted 2008-05-03 01:09 PM


"I think I'll build me a fire
and wait for tomorrow
maybe spend another day
neath the hot summer sun"

It is good to find that which we enjoy in today will be available to us tomorrow as well...nicely done

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2008-05-05 08:01 AM


Hi Joe... lovely gifting here...   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2008-05-05 08:46 AM


Such simple sights and sound can bring such pleasure ~ especially to one who takes the time to truly see and listen.


Linda

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