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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-05-01 10:59 PM


It’s just past midnight.  
Twelve-year-olds
Felix and Wawa
are sitting on the bank
of the Delaware
off Fairmont Avenue.  

No one cares
they’re out that late,
so don’t even ask.  

They’re sitting beside
the old wooden water pipes
going into the Delaware.  

They’re watching big cargo ships
bring stuff in from far away.  

Felix is telling Wawa
how much he misses his dad.  

He's telling Wawa
about the water wheel
his dad made him,
before his dad
got taken away,
and locked-up.  

Wawa tells Felix
he’ll see his dad again.  

That won’t happen,
and they both know it.  

It never did.  

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (05-01-2008 11:33 PM).]

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Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
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1 posted 2008-05-01 11:30 PM


He telling Wawa
about the water wheel
his dad made him,
before his dad
got taken away,
and locked-up.

"He's or He is"

This one is sad Bobby... I'm sending Felix a hug.

Tammy<333

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-05-01 11:35 PM


Thanks dear Tammy,

Thanks for spotting another mistake.  Felix says thanks for the hug Hon.  I don't know what Felix would do without you and Wawa.

Love Bobby

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-05-03 03:18 PM


Emotion Filled Bobby!



ARCTIC WIND

2islander2
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by the sea
4 posted 2008-05-03 04:29 PM


Hi Bobby, it is sad...I particularly enjoyed the part when they were watching ships, I live in a port too...I visited Philadelphie in 1996, it is a beautiful city...I slept in the youth hostel and saw the harbour, the museum, the liberty bell and some nice ancient political buildings...It was summer and it's a great memory talking about it...

  Have  a nice day

   yann

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2008-05-03 04:48 PM


Thanks Artic Wind,

Yes, I suppose it is a little emotion filled.  It was actually a comforting experience for both Felix and Wawa, as Wawa had dad problems of his own.

BTW, I traveled through the mountains of Montana by train as a child.  It's a lovely place.  

I used to ride free all over because my mother worked for the railroad.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-05-03 04:55 PM


Thanks Yann,

Do you mean to tell me you were in Philadelphia in 1996, and you didn't stop in to see me?  That's very naughty.

I'm glad you enjoyed your stay here.  It is a beautiful and wonderful city.

I still live only a few blocks from the river.  The kids, the dog, and I still go there often.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2008-05-04 06:57 AM


hugs for Felix, Bobby... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

shyvl
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8 posted 2008-05-04 08:21 AM


Glad to know Felix had WaWa to talk to. Felix experienced too much sadness in his life not to have a friend.
sharyn

Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2008-05-04 09:33 AM


Thanks dear RDB,

Felix hugs you right back.  He's good with the hugs.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2008-05-04 09:34 AM


Thanks dear Sharyn,

Yes, Wawa is a very good friend for Felix.

Bobby

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2008-05-04 09:47 AM


A very close moment between caring friends that would never be forgotten.

Simply stated poem ~ but deeply felt by this reader. I have had such memorable moments of sharing with friends ~ and I hold them dear to my heart.

Sad scenario for Felix regarding his father ~ but Felix is strong. Life has made him that way.


Linda


Margherita
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12 posted 2008-05-04 10:29 AM


Watching ships moving in and out of the harbour is a scene that every boy would like to share with a father too, I understand the sadness of the moment, but it is alleviated by the presence of a true, caring friend.

Love this one, dear Bobby.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
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13 posted 2008-05-04 12:04 PM


It's great to have a true friend to talk to, it can get you through a lot.
                                  Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2008-05-04 01:34 PM


Thanks dear Linda,

For the kind words on the poem.  Yes, Felix is one tough cookie.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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15 posted 2008-05-04 01:36 PM


Thanks dear Margherita,

Yes, Wawa, while being a tough guy, was always there for me.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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16 posted 2008-05-04 01:37 PM


Thanks Ida,

What you say is very true.

Love Bobby

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