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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief 
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do I love her? should I kill her? what’s the difference? one hotel after the ten before filthy stains all but outline the floor. fell asleep to the sounds of sorrow woke up yesterday…tomorrow, feeling unaffected, strangely disconnected. not so sure man… am i still human alive? i lied before, i don’t sleep anymore. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
hmmmm...this is a poem I probably shouldn't read while watching Dennis Miller on Fox, but I found myself drawn to this in your intriguing write: "fell asleep to the sounds of sorrow woke up yesterday…tomorrow, feeling unaffected, strangely disconnected" |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
John...Sounds like the lines from a song. Loved the last lines. i lied before, i don’t sleep anymore. Is our song project in the trash can or still kicking??? Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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