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MysteriousCellist
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0 posted 2008-04-29 10:13 PM


-APRIL 27-

I stand at the gate,
to a graveyard.

Here lie the souls,
the ones lost and forgotten,
but are they really fogotten?

If they are, then why am I here?

Here lie my best friend,
here lie my girlfriend,
here lie my girlfriends friend.

They all died because of me.

From a stupid mistake I made,
and they are all gone.

The ones closest to me.

My brother and sister,
my future wife, Gone.

All three, I've never seen before or in a year.
All three closer to me then any 'real' thing in the world.
All three die in the same night.
All three die for the same reason.

Because I died...

I lost them all in one night,
and couldn't bare the loneliness.

I slept and never woke.

The last words of each to me,
I Love You.

Lo, How a Rose E'er Blooming,
a beautiful song.

It played at all of our funerals.

Everyone cried at their funerals
but for mine,
nobody came.

~IAN BELL

~MysteriousCellist
IAN BELL

© Copyright 2008 Ian Bell ~ Cellist & Composer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-04-29 10:33 PM


Such a powerful poem.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2008-04-30 01:43 AM


Nice writing...James
Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-04-30 02:31 AM


How very sad, Ian. My heart goes out to you.
                                    Ida

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-04-30 03:37 PM


Writing out your emotions works wonders don't ya think!

Nice emotion filled write Mysterious!

ARCTIC WIND

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5 posted 2008-05-05 06:58 PM


Brilliant Poetry...enjoyed!

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

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