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Caliban
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0 posted 2008-04-29 01:49 AM



Steps

Steps I take
Start my path while the,

Steps I make
Bring me closer to the,

Steps that fake
The pace of a man whose,

Steps can break
This endless cycle; but all I have are,

Steps that ache
With paid for pain of a thousand miles while,

Steps that shake
Like Gods’ own tread split my world till,

Steps I take
Start it over again.

© Copyright 2008 Alex Lenart - All Rights Reserved
Caliban
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1 posted 2008-04-29 01:53 AM


I'm up late and can't sleep. I have no idea if this makes sense. I'm sure I'll read this tomorrow and wonder what i was thinking. But thanks for taking the time to read my late night ramblings

Muna seasaimid le ceartas, ní sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-04-29 07:16 AM


Alex... you must stay up late more often so I can read and enjoy your ramblings love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2008-04-29 09:59 AM


Sometimes it seems as if we are on an endless treadmill...change isn't ever easy, nor the lessons that we learn that are worthwhile.  I enjoyed this honest glimpse into your thoughts.
2islander2
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4 posted 2008-04-29 11:51 AM


In fact a endlesss poem...enjoyed it and went upstairs...

  yann

Caliban
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5 posted 2008-04-29 02:31 PM


Thank you all for the kind words
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2008-04-29 06:32 PM


Some of our late night ramblings can be the most interesting!

Your poem reminded me of times when I have felt like a hamster in a cage, furiously running nowhere fast on a tread wheel.

Sleep well this night! ~ but if sleep eludes you, remember that you are just a pen stroke away from writing your next perplexing poem! lol

Big hug,
EA


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