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hiddensmiles
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0 posted 2008-04-28 05:16 PM


i had a dream
of the sky
it was shining so bright
that i had
to close my eyes
but when i
opened them again
the sky that was
shinning so bright
was gone
leaving me all alone
in my dreams
thinking of what
that might have been
and why i had
that feeling that i knew
what it was

JJ

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Denise
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1 posted 2008-04-28 10:49 PM


Dreams can be hard to figure out sometimes. This one sounds pleasant though, I think! I stopped trying to figure mine out a long time ago! I'm just glad I still wake up in the morning!
AAB
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since 2008-04-10
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2 posted 2008-04-28 10:53 PM


ah those dreams that leave you with no memory only a  feeling. The harder you try to rember and hold on to it the faster it goes.
Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
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3 posted 2008-04-28 11:31 PM


This is awesome JJ… It reminds me of how I am avoiding some and longing deeply for others.

Tammy<333

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4 posted 2008-05-10 12:25 PM


Makes me wonder, JJ, if dreams are our reminders to learn lessons from what we have done.  

I like this one.

Alison

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