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steavenr
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0 posted 2008-04-28 11:40 AM


sounds of latent uniformity
bundle themselves in diversity
loosing the bonds of helplessness
choosing chains of progressiveness

sifting softly, sipping sweetly
from the fountain of multiplicity

are you there? the soft voice pleas
as it calls beyond the lees
remaining in the accent of the soul
falling short of its nuance to the goal

sharing, caring...simply daring
to look beyond the stream of variety



© Copyright 2008 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
shyvl
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1 posted 2008-04-28 12:07 PM


beautiful and eloquent. I love the way your rhymns are so flowing.
sharyn

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2 posted 2008-04-28 12:11 PM


Yes, I am here. ~ Reading and enjoying your fine poetry as per usual!

"Are you there?" ~ Oh, yes! Indeed you are! ~ and with your ever-present poetic presence of mind!


Linda

steavenr
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3 posted 2008-04-28 12:15 PM


sharyn and Linda, thank you for your very kind comments (btw, nice alliteration, Linda)
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-04-28 12:42 PM


Thank you ~ And I liked your alliteration, as well!

~ "sifting softly, sipping sweetly"


Linda

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2008-04-29 01:44 PM


This is good. I so understand what you are saying.
                           Ida

steavenr
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6 posted 2008-04-29 02:29 PM


Ida, thank you...love it when someone 'gets it'
AAB
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7 posted 2008-04-29 09:00 PM


Ver nice. it flows so well.

"Death cannot stop true love, all it can do is delay it for a while" The Princess Bride

jwesley
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8 posted 2008-04-29 09:04 PM


"...from the fountain of multiplicity", like this line a lot...

well done..

j.

Richy
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9 posted 2008-04-29 10:09 PM




are you there? the soft voice pleas
as it calls beyond the lees
remaining in the accent of the soul
falling short of its nuance to the goal

Quite a bit to ponder over.
Very nice!

Freedom of expression is our, write.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2008-04-30 06:41 PM


wonderful Steaven!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

steavenr
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11 posted 2008-04-30 09:44 PM


j, thank you for your kind comment
Richy, ponder away…thank you kindly
RDB, you are so gracious…thanks

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